Start over: a redo on the Dino co. story

 Hello my fellow writers -- Enislee is here again. A few months ago I posted about if you wanted me to keep working on the Dino co. story or if I should leave it to fade into non- existence. I'm not really sure wether I'm loving the way it's shaping. So, I'm asking YOU; should I rewrite it? To give you some insight here is how it even became an idea:

My journey with Dino co. started with a box of writing prompts. I randomly took from it just having a little fun, not really being too serious. Here are the prompts I got: 

Characters Prompts:

Someone who is a dinosaur scientist

Someone who knows something others do not

A person with very poor memory

The host 

Person who was born wealthy 

Lottery winner

Security Guard

Theme prompts:

Noticed at last

Problem at bus station 

Video camera

In my mind tons of stories were building up and I quickly made some things up 

With all of that I turned it into this:

Characters Prompts:

Someone who is a dinosaur scientist (Jerald Alexandar) : 👽 : this symbol is the best thing for a scientist in the emoji's!

Role in the story; Jerald is the HEAD scientist of Dino co. the company and "Finings of a lifetime" Dino co's. website.

Personality: Jerald Alexandar is bubbly and jolly, even when his intelligence is off the charts. He views science to be a matter of faith and is very strong in it (his faith) . Jerald treats Charlotte and Genesis as daughters and he is a true to God man.

Looks: Jerald has tamed white hair with a moustache and bright blue eyes. He wears thin glasses and polo shirts are his thing.

Someone who knows something others do not (Genesis Webster): 👀 : Gen is observant... what can I say?

Role in the story: She is a scientist hoping to get a steady job. Thats when she gets one at Dino co. 

Personality: Genesis (Gen) Webster is quiet and observant. When she first got her job at Dino co, she observed everyone and notice little details quietly. She is strong and courageous but she usually is observing things. She is an intellect and very intelligent in many ranges of topics. Her dog Einstein is a huge saint bernard and her biggest companion after losing her boyfriend Ben Gesky. She's not truly ready for another relationship so she treats Johnny more as a brother than a love interest. She doesn't believe in God and is still searching. For meaning. 

Looks: Gen has short dark brown hair. She has blue eyes and pink cheeks and lips. She likes to wear denim jackets and combat boots. Overall she is beautiful. 

A person with very poor memory (Charlotte McGuire): 💀 : See you when Jesus comes back... rest in peace...

Role in the story: Charlotte is Jerald's secretary and she can sometimes come off as clumsy and forgetful.

Personality: Charlotte is clumsy and very sweet but she can be serious and intelligent. I based her off of "Princess Diaries's" portrayal of their character Charlotte (the name charlotte is a total coincidence).

She is best friends with Genesis and they both have a tendency to be overlooked. Her fav movie is Mary Poppins and she isn't quiet, but not outgoing either. She is just clumsy. 

Looks: Charlotte has blonde hair and plain brown-blue eyes. She has the sweetest smile and loves romantics, like roses and books. She likes wearing cozy sweaters, and pencil skirts. She was wearing a pencil skirt with a blazer and button up when she was found dead. 

Which of these Looks descriptions do you like better?

Looks: Charlotte has blonde hair at her shoulders (flipped ends). She has blue eyes (didn't realize that so many characters have that eye colour) and loves red lipstick. Her trademark is her skirt suits and stiletto's, but she sometimes is found in 1950's looking dresses.

The host (Heather Ford) : 💋: Yah just speaks for itself...

Role in the story: Heather is known for being the "party girl" and she hosted the employee party when they went to the lottery. She is on the Marketing board and loves hosting party's and gatherings. 

Personality:  Heather is outgoing, sassy, and chews gum like there is no tomorrow. She isn't very good at being sympathetic and likes to gossip, but she can listen to someone empathetically when needed. She is sarcastic and doesn't love working. She is one of Gen's best friends. 

Looks: Heather is a red head through and through. Most of the time her hair is dyed in a vivid "Poppy red" even though she has red hair anyway. She wears red lipstick to match her hair and wears a good amount of makeup. She has greyish eyes. Her fav choice in dress is, a green tee- shirt, but for work she wears... yah... a tee- and leggings. 

Person who was born wealthy (Odette Alexandar) : 😈 : We all get it...

Role in the story: Odette Alexandar is the daughter of Jerald Alexandar and is the villain of the story 

she was the one communicating with Dino Wonders. She is the Director/VP of the company.

Personality: Odette is as sly as anyone in the biz. She is quiet and patient, while being cruel. She is sharp, compelling, even charming, but under all that, she is quietly searching her next move. Odette indulges in giving everyone a hard time. She is professional throughout her whole life dynamic. Everything must be perfect. 

Looks: Odette has platinum blonde hair. She always has a dark red or pink lip and dark green eyes. She has her hair done with bangs and layers. She wears glasses and professional skirt suits. Her everyday wardrobe when not at work is black blouses and jeans. 

Lottery winner (Nina Milton) : 💭 : I don't know? It's just a bubble to fill her spot...

Role: She has always wanted to be important so when Odette asked her to help her go against Jerald she hesitated but was hungry for attention so she accepted. She was only a janitor for the Dino co. museum before.

Personality: Nina has always wanted to be noticed. She is as quirky as they come and she isn't the brightest bulb in the chandelier. She just wants to fit in. When Odette and her goons ask wether or not Nina is in, she doesn't know what to say. She just wants attention. 

Looks: Nina has short brown hair and hazel eyes. She wears a bright smile but isn't surprisingly pretty. Her most regular attire is are janitorial coveralls. When off duty she is seen in simple t- shirts and overalls or jeans.

Security Guard (Johnny Triller) : 💣: Rookie!!!

Role in story: Johnny is one of the off hand witnesses of the crime of Charlotte's death. 

Personality; Johnny had always wanted to be scientist but couldn't afford school for it. Instead he pursued another dream: his dream of law and he became a security guard. Johnny was offered a job at Dino co. for better security- - for the battle of the dino diggers. He was thrilled at his opportunity to be surrounded by science. Johnny has a sweet spot; he loves to play piano. He is still known by is peers as a rookie, but has great potential to be a good cop. Johnny and Genesis could be called an item but he's still quite involved in his work. 

Looks: Johnny has brown hair blue brown eyes and a firm look to him. He's what some would call hardcore. But underneath he's got a warm smile and a handsome build. Genesis thinks of him as a brother and the two get along very well. Johnny's wardrobe usually is his guard gear, but off duty he is seen with a white tee- shirt and jeans.

Security Guard (Tony Sal) :👮: Nothing to say...

Role in story: As a side character I added really recently, here is; Tony Sal, Johnny's guard partner.

Personality: Wise, vigilant, honest, and has great integrity. Sal is detail- oriented, and knows how to keep his composure. He isn't much of a mushy type but can handle being empathetic quite well (to Johny's surprise) He loves the outdoors and likes to be hands on with his work.

Looks: ???? I'm not dead set on the pic I have... so if you guys have different suggestions of age, looks, etc etc etc... then please. That would be great.

Theme prompts:

Noticed at last:

Nina is finally noticed by someone (Odette)

Problem at bus station:

I'm not truly sure of what to do with this : in my current story that I have been working on, a thief steals Genesis's research...

what do you think about the thief idea?

Video camera:

??? Tell me what I should do with this...give me some ideas!

So what do YOU think : Should I rewrite this story or not? Tell me in the comments!

Okkkkkaaaaayyyy 

Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Enislee